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He played this love song
It was sweet and went on for days
like our lovemaking it went on for days
we moved together slowly at first
as the tempo of that enthralling song
would fervently increase, eagerly
we would peak over and over again.
At times it was like I was going to die
but he kept playing this love song
over again and we made love again
until finally one day I penitently cried
‘no more’ because this song sang
of sacred things he would never do
and me I won’t continue to make love
to a song that I can‘t ever call my own.

`always write poetry, Cheryl

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