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The entourage glides
shimmering on the glittering stage
intended and determined
they make a predictable line
to introduce a majestic ballerina
adorned with divine purpose
to spiritually miraculously dance
DNA spiral like steps; a performance
of true essence, the anointed ballet!

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`always write poetry, Cheryl


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The following comments are for "The Anointed Ballet"
by ladyngold

Dancing!
A theme I can get into.

Very lovely, Cheryl. Nicely put together. I like the sonics of each line. Internaly rhyme not overdone. And the DNA/true essence/anointed was nice as well. Liked that combo.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 5, 2005 )

ladyngold's "Ballet"
Cheryl- Forgot to come back to comment..(Thanks Lans, for leading me back.)

Nicely done. You seem to be acclimating quite well, here at Lit. Disregard (remain above) the petty threads of discord and keep growing.

Glad you posted,
BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 5, 2005 )





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