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Idly I sit here…
beads of thoughts
materializing
then vanishing
into hours
until
the day passes
with grist for
the mill
pulverized
into dust.


------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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by Char

Our Queen of Brevity
Char, I commented on this and I came to read this again, finding my comment not here. Sorry about that.

This is a very good poem Char, 25 word bites, with my verbosity would have been 2500 to say the same thing, which is a very admirable quality you hold.

Your biggest fan.,
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

Lovely Avatar Char
Quite a story in that too, you look pensive. You know how I love photography and dislike those unnatural poses.....this is so natural, it is like a poem in itself. Perhaps that is coming from the very observant person I am.

Goes very well with this poem of yours hun. Good stuff.

Dar:)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )





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