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Hip-hop rascal knave

Salsa dancing Queen of Hearts

Roller-skate Duchess

Presentation with fresh twist

Alice in new Wonderland


3/6/05

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The following comments are for "Ballet (2005) a 5/7/5/7/7"
by Bobby7L

"Curiouser and Curiouser"
...One of my favourite quotes. Insatiable curiosity, have I.

What a character. Here's to Her!

Skål!

lk.n.o.1.ai.h.ia

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Balletic Birthday Bash!
Lans- Thanks. Came across last eve and decided correct time to post here.

Guess "quote" would be my first "short story."

B7L.3e.XXCali.1

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Pas de Deux
If you only knew...

When I was in 5th grade I suddenly became the biggest klutz you've ever met. I was forever running into tables and corners, and my mom would give me the business about it. Finally she decided ballet would teach me some grace.

Enter Lans in a studio of 2nd graders. Not only much taller and thicker, but much less graceful. I was humiliated!!

I found my rhythm in a few years, but me as a ballerina would have been quite the spectacle knowing how I turned out.

So flattered I am! It's a Happy Dyslexic Birthday!

LL

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Lans/Jenifer/ Ballare
Lans- 'Reflection' appears to be all over site these days...Positive vibrations...Dance on 'danseuse.'

Jenifer- You may recall this one from next-door.
Thank ya kindly..

Reorter at large,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Lilia - at "Ballet"
Lilia-Coming from ass-kickin' SUPER SEDUCTIVE SEDUCTRESS, such as yourself, I take that as high honour.

Reporter at large,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Bobby ballet fun...
Thank you for inviting us to dance this ballet with you Bobby it was fun ...great write.

( Posted by: ladyngold [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )

B7L?...
Like much, just curious as usual...love to salsa dance, love to dance many forms...at present have to have knee, constructed to do the do...
but, the many forms "Lght My Fire" OH! I can't wait...I have to have a foot reconstructed, but,
should less pain...Juliard, limited ballet,
and heart, I love to "Do It", (too many high in
time,)I love to dance...dance is poetry in motion...

Thanks Bobby...Very much Loved

Robinbird

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )

ladyngold/robin- Ask Alice
Cheryl- Thanks. As you see, I used "tanka" (5/7/5/7/7) for this poem. Glad you read and enjoyed.

Robin- Thanks for your continued interest in my work. Much appreciated.

B.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )

Robert William
This is nice .... loved the tanka form, so Tanka for dat!~

you have lots of people interested in your writing, I know it comes from that charming personality of yours that shines through your poems and your comments!!!

This was very nice RW...

From DLO xo

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 5, 2005 )

Dareva in new "Wonderland"
darlene- Thanks. Posted over at Wf, 3 months ago. Have penned a few posted here, using same format.."Sirens Seen" comes to mind.

Take care of you,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 5, 2005 )





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