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My Desired Love

Thunder rolls, lightning bolts across the sky

Daydreaming endlessly

When I知 in your arms, I see a rainbow of light

I gaze into your eyes, the love I see is amazing

The satisfaction I feel as your lips cascade against mine

Your love is amazing, it痴 one of a kind

When you hug me, tightly, all my worries seem to dissipate

My life takes on a new meaning

Let痴 realize that the inevitable is for us to find our desired love

I値l be your inspiration, through all types of trials

When I see a teardrop fall from your eye

I値l reassure you I値l remain in your arms forever

I知 not like the others who have been in love with you

And walked away when problems seemed to arise

You値l notice without doubt that my love is true

I wont turn away when I see your pain

What would that accomplish, tell me what would we gain



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The following comments are for "My Desired Love"
by DyanEve

DyanEve writes Passionate
This piece was extremely passionate with a creative manipulation of words that resulted in a wonderful poem.

( Posted by: ladyngold [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )

Thanks so Much
Ladyngold, thanks so much for the wonderful compliment on this poem, it means the world to me to finally be able to share some of these poems.

( Posted by: DyanEve [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )





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