- published: June 1, 2005
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If you want to see the darkness take a chance and turn away from the light you eyes will soar and your soul will weep but it will be worth the darkness.
How can I tell him?
I thought I could…
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couldnt grab what u really wants to say...
but I lke the idea of darkness
I believe..if u really want to see the darkness ....
take a chance and have a walk while your eyes are closed...
see how many times you will hit the wall or feel like u will slip..
and thank God that you are in light
] On: June 3, 2005
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