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Chance
by poetfreak (Member) - published: June 1, 2005
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Category - Poetry
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If you want to see the darkness take a chance and turn away from the light you eyes will soar and your soul will weep but it will be worth the darkness.


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by poetfreak

??
couldnt grab what u really wants to say...

but I lke the idea of darkness

I believe..if u really want to see the darkness ....
take a chance and have a walk while your eyes are closed...

see how many times you will hit the wall or feel like u will slip..

and thank God that you are in light



~Hiba

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )





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