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WHY DONíT YOU SEE WHAT I HAVE DONE
AFTER ALL IíM STILL YOUR SON
WHAT IS THIS THING THAT YOU HATE
WHY DO YOU ALWAYS CLOSE THE GATE

ALL THE LIES THROUGHOUT THE YEARS
ALL THE UPSET PAIN AND TEARS
WHY CARNíT YOU LOVE ME FOR JUST ME
AND NOT FOR SOMEONE I COULD BE

MY OWN LIFE IS WHAT IVE GOT
THATíS THE THING THAT YOU FORGOT
ITíS MY OWN LIFE AND INDEED
EVEN IF I DONíT SUCCEED

WHAT IS THIS THING THAT I HAVE DONE
AFTER ALL IíM STILL YOUR SON
ALL THE WORDS THAT YOU HAVE SPOKEN
ALL THE PROMISES YOU HAVE BROKEN

FOR FORTY YEARS IVE HAD THIS PAIN
FOR FORTY YEARS YOUíVE WATCHED ME DRAIN
ALWAYS TELLING ME YOUR LIE
KEEPING IT HIDDEN UNTIL YOU DIE

BUT I DONíT CARE FOR I HAVE RISEN
UP ABOVE YOUR HUMAN PRISON
ALL THESE WORDS I HAVE SPOKEN
SAY GOODBYE THE BONDS ARE BROKEN








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The following comments are for "your son"
by assam

Your Son
Assam;
Check for typo's..This is very moving, and I can't impagine what you are going through. I have never experienced anything like this, but reading it brought a heavy burden upon me..

Thanks for sharing your inmost feelings...and putting it down on paper. Writing helps more than you know.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 2, 2005 )





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