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i can promis you the world
i can promis you the whole wide world
but it wouldnt come close
to how i really feel
about you
yes, it's true
i love you, baby
i wont promis you anything
but i'll give you everything
the moon and the stars
it's that easy
not much cause
for alarm
it's how we are
every moment
every hour
it hurts more
it's so sower
to be away
from you
too long
your voice
makes me happy
but not when
you say
then i'm sad
oh so sad
but then you say 'hello'
and i'm not filled with wow
i'm happy again.
then end.


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