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a single tear
full of fear and longing
flows and runs down your smooth face
i can hardly bear
the feelings that run through
the both of us
it's such a major step
that we should dare to take
forward
in time we will come to know
how each of us knows
each other so well
it seems like a jerny
but not much can be told
out of love and out of memorie
it doesnt matter
who loves the other
but how we love eachother
in our hearts
tonight
such a special night
i tell you how i feel
you tell me the same way
we hold eachother
for now and till forever
if only is didnt hace to
end
my love.
the end.

------
T.A.O


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