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My brother that rains down joins me on this day
A walk in the misery refreshes dismal reflections
Falsely kindred but I feel at home in this presence
Smiling at the sky that has gloomed over the sun
Shine not everyday and give room for the darker steps
Tomorrow it may return but at least it is gone
The rain it knows me without fear of what I think
We are powerful together as the walking unwanted
Passers-by look within and wonder if I can not see
My eyes travel so deep, they have reason to wonder
Hide it from my brother and I for as long as you can


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