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Mind orgasm
exorcism of the soul
cleansing salvation

`always write poetry, Cheryl

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The following comments are for "Mind orgasm...~Senyru~"
by ladyngold

Cheryl's mind orgasm...?
Nice Senyru. I've done lots of these and haven't posted them. I find them a challenge to write and am happy with the outcome of the message you have here. Nicely done Cheryl....and WELCOME to Lit.


( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: May 31, 2005 )

I agree with Dar, very good, you make it look so easy. Welcome, hope to read more of you!

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 31, 2005 )


Beautiful! I have those mental ones all the time, I don't write haiku, bit I love this one.

great read,


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 1, 2005 )

ladyngold's "cleansing"
Cheryl- I am fan of concise and pithy.

Enjoyed the compression.

Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Bobby Liked This Haiku LOL
Thank you for your support Bobby and gentle honesty about my works.

( Posted by: ladyngold [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )

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