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All he need to do is read my poems
and know all he ever guessed.

Like do I really like flowers
What is my favorite perfume?

These things are all told in selective lines.
Clearly stated sometimes discretely,
but all if he really looked
penned and honestly exposed.

Stories about lost love always
makes me cry I wrote that
in so many ways so many times
in various different poems
that they touch me and I wept.





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`always write poetry, Cheryl


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The following comments are for "I Wept"
by ladyngold

I wept
Cheryl,

'All he need to do is read my poems
and know all he ever guessed.'

How true! Poets open their hearts and souls in their work. This piece also reflects to me the people who shy away from reading poetry and not savouring the beauties and heartaches of life seen through other souls.

A very good write...thank you,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: June 3, 2005 )

Emotional
I could feel so much through these words. Keep up the good work

( Posted by: DyanEve [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )





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