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'To all who have felt the suffocating onset of clinical depression.'

I looked upon
the long grey sky,
As far as my eye
could reach.

A maelstrom ominous,
a dark marauder,
and the clouds my soul impeach.

My heart, my voice,
my laugh, my choice,
A thief this
Swirling beast.

Crushing cumulonimbus
this malevolent smog
leaves me
at my least.

Copyright 2005, Kate McInnes

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