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The more you tighten the chains
The harder Iím gonna try and break free
The more you try and control my life
The more I want to just be me

You canít straighten out your mistakes
By living your dreams through me
I wanted to do my own thing
I just want to be free

I want to make my own choices
Not do what you want me to do
When Iím asked all about me
I donít want to answer Ďwho?í

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