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I cried the other day,
Not just a little tear but really cried.
I felt my heart break.
Not just a little crack but totally apart.
I cried for an hour or two,
Possibly even longer I couldn't tell.
I just cried and cried.
No one was there to comfort the aching.
The lonliness.
Oh how I felt such separation from the world.
How I longed for a friend to hold me close.
How I needed the touch of a human soul upon my own.
I cried the other day.
Too bad know one would ever know!

------
Mona Lisa


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