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There is a sense of impending doom in the world today. Apocalyptic foreshadowing, maybe. Itís in the movies, papers, all around us. People fear what is not known. Evidenced by our bigotry. I laugh at you. You who falls asleep like a child upon the safety of your godís altar. You who called me a sinner beyond reconciliation. I pity your hypocracy. You honestly make me sick. I have more respect for the wholly good or the wholly evil. Purity is the cornerstone of their ideology. At least they pick a side. Nothing false lies in their souls. It is you who canít make up your mind whether to kneel at the altar or in front of a zipper. As for myself? I rejoice in ďitĒ.

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by Robert Walker

every life must end. How it ends is not consequential.

I like this line

" It is you who canít make up your mind whether to kneel at the altar or in front of a zipper. " \

( Posted by: greatsmile [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

Jesus is coming soon
Who has false lies in thier souls? False lies would make it a truth? If the lie is false then false lies mean actually the truth? Your word language is not right in this. Jesus is coming soon and Jesus will know who has the lies in thier souls. Man can't judge this himself because man is not God and doesn't know. I dont respect wholly evil because wholly good sometimes is the wholly evil only it thinks that its a wholly good. Thats a trick of Satan. Satan will play with your mind. You have to be careful what voice you are really really listening to. I dont fear the coming of Jesus. I'm happy that Jesus is coming soon.

( Posted by: Agape [Member] On: May 29, 2005 )

false truth
I thought about it and the way to say it better would be making it into "false truth" not "false lies" because false lies doesn't make any sense.

( Posted by: Agape [Member] On: May 29, 2005 )

Again my friends religion clouds judgement. "Nothing false lies in their souls." Read those words to yourself. There is nothing that is false that lies within the truly evil or the truly good. You are thinking of the words lies in a completely different context than I wrote it. Nice try though and I'm glad you think Jesus is coming for you so if you wouldn't mind stop replying to my writing and get ready for the party.

( Posted by: Robert Walker [Member] On: May 29, 2005 )

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