Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
8.33

(3 votes)


RatingRated by
7Unknown
10Unknown
8chapter1

You must login to vote

Silent Suffering

Why does everyone presume
That I知 doing just fine?
They think I知 just a shoulder to cry on
But I知 gonna draw the line

You think my life is just perfect
Of course there痴 nothing wrong
If only you knew the truth
This craps gone on for too long

Why can you not hear me
Crying in bed at night
Hear the screaming inside my head
Not everything is black and white

I知 suffering just as much as you
If not ten times more
But you just cannot see that
I wonder what I知 living for



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Silent Suffering"
by ~H~

introspective
A very introspective poem. Thought provoking in that it makes you wonder how many people are in this position.
I wasn't quite clear whether the 'you' referred to was supposed to be everybody or a specific person, but it doesn't really matter.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: December 14, 2002 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: