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Dear one, you brought life to a frozen heart. You warmed it up and set it to beating.

You brought your presence to my mind. You have been the source of my inspiration ever since.

I take a bit of your strength everyday. It serves to heat up my body.


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The following comments are for "How You Love Me"
by Dfortyseven

You love me

I like this work, sounds like many people I know. Great imagery, in so many little words Keith.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 26, 2005 )

How You Love Me
Windchime, I went back and looked at it, and changed it the day after. I followed that with the reworking of "Potential".

( Posted by: dfortyseven [Member] On: June 9, 2005 )

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