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If Only

You barely even know me
Yet I feel youíre already a friend
I know youíll never acknowledge me
But is it so wrong for me to pretend?

I see you almost everyday
Yet Iíd be lucky if you remembered my name
Sometimes I feel so lonely
I wonder if you feel the same

Itís like we live in different worlds
Both so far apart
We both have so much in common
Can we not just try and make a start?

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