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Longingly legs ache
to wrap themselves around you
Rugs get laid instead

Elizabeth Maksymiuk

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The following comments are for "The Carpet Installer"
by emaks

Carpet Installed
Elizabeth, I really enjoyed this. Made my morning!


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 25, 2005 )

wall to wall
Excellent emaks. Gave me a laugh. I couldn't imagine what angle "the carpet installer" was going to take when I read the title. Hah! I used to be a front-entry man myself. Installing new aluminium and glass entry-ways on office buildings, I mean. Watch out for carpet pythons.

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 26, 2005 )

Shagged carpet
Ohhhh, this makes me want to take off all my clothes and roll on the floor Unfortunately, my carpet's fairly worn after years of mistreatment at the hands of my feet.



( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

Nailed by a carpetman
Thank you all for your time and comments. Sorry to be so tardy. I have been busy, but alas, not with the carpet guy...

best to you all-

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: June 22, 2005 )

Kundalini Tantra Rising (hot prana)
Once again, prana (lifeforce) is strong within you. Your images brought forth long beautiful snakes (symbolic of Kundalini?) to my mind, gliding tightly all around this man, while he continues to lay carpet unaware!

Guru Mohammad Jesus Bernstein

( Posted by: MohammadJesusBernstein [Member] On: November 16, 2005 )

Blue Collar Installer
At your service ma'am! Real nice poem you've written there about appreciation of the hard working man.

( Posted by: BubbaJackson [Member] On: November 16, 2005 )

emaks on carpets
I should have told you I liked this one back when I first saw it, Elizabeth.

Glad I found it again.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: November 16, 2005 )

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