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To the crazy sister living in Nevada
The only girl Mom and Dad hada
Went from medic to associate directa
Here's a happy note of birthday to ya

Despite her back and messed up knee
She still works almost for free
And around her garden nary a tree
But she's my sis, and that's good enough for me

She's got some wisdom from her travel
And sometimes uses it to spread her gravel
Though in all times she is quite humble
Despite her brothers four, are bumbles

I love her dearly despite the distance
And have listened to her on many an instance
While other women and "sisters" I've borne witness
My sister is queen, with complete persistance

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"All computers are garbage. They only contain answers." ~ Pablo Picasso


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The following comments are for "My Crazy Crazy Sister"
by JLimer

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I have a sister who fits into this category perfectly. I think it may be something that either fits or doesn't, but if you feel it... it's golden.

( Posted by: eleanor [Member] On: May 26, 2005 )

cute poem.
i have been skipping around, reading some poems here today. i'm glad i read yours.

j.jd.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: May 26, 2005 )





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