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You've watched me from afar; you’ve wanted to have me for your own,
I tried to tell you we could never be, yet you never gave up on me,
You aren't going to like me as you think, for I'm will become your worst tormenter.
Don’t you see?
You've pushed me here, now;
After I said "no" four time already, just you wait and see.
You may be happy now, but happiness with someone who doesn't love you back:
You will come to learn is no happiness at all,
I will take you to your bitter ends, watching your life slip away,
Just trust me I won't go away, we aren’t meant to be.
So please give up on me.
Just give up for your sanity,
For your own innocents,
I will corrupt your soul and then you'll know what it meant to lose it all.
So take my words and hold them close you will be your own downfall.\
I will help you see, since you are so innocent to me.

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The following comments are for "Don't you see?"
by heartbreakersbeware

Dont You See
Nicely done I really like how you express yourself in this poem remind me of my own “With Someone Else”

( Posted by: Aranis32 [Member] On: May 23, 2005 )

Well, i tryed to go see what your poem was and how it was similar, but you don't have it posted! hmm...thanks for the comment!!

( Posted by: heartbreakersbeware [Member] On: May 24, 2005 )

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