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They are both waking up but in two separate places
Continuing their lives as if they have no empty spaces
Looking in the mirror they see the sight of each other
They ignore the painful image and continue with another

Strange that two people would suppress such a pain
Shouldnít being together make it all go away?
Conflict and hurt will create such a distance
Confusion within will challenge loves existence

He will walk on pretending like nothing matters
Selfish on the outside but deep down his heart shatters
She will move forward as if she is over the feeling
Emanating happiness but her heart craves his healing

Communicating with each other might help with the hurt
But itís pride that stops them from exchanging words
And to justify the end might make it go easy
But having lost love will certainly drive you crazy

His conflict right now might keep him from showing
That itís only her love that keeps him going
And her sorrow she feels might stop her from giving
But itís only his soul that keeps her love living

They are two worlds apart but still in love

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