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Through the smoky haze and the routine of the scene
They carried on like usual just doing their thing
Oblivious to destiny and separated by life
He met her eyes and their whole world changed that night

Some months went by and he was still on her mind
This stranger appeared in her presence a couple of times
He was healing his wounds and she was moving on
But each time their paths crossed their flirty smiles worked like a charm

Then fate had its way and the two worlds combined
Acting innocent like children you could see their souls intertwine
In a scene like this a typical “encounter” would only seem fitting
But as love would have it, this was just the beginning…..

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The following comments are for "THE BEGINNING"
by MeghanC

Put in such eloquent words
This is written very beautifully. Thanks for an execellent read.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 6, 2005 )

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