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My love you`re my world
for without you am lifeless
Days seems to fly by
when we`re together
but life pains an` days snail
when we`re apart!

Summer an` winter all days
with you my love
let me love you ever
for i live to love you
And am looking at you
as if i had never seen you before


------
csam


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The following comments are for "My Love"
by chriss

chriss
Some of these lines are very confusing. But overall the poem worked for me! I liked the twistiness of it and the punctuation. Interesting!!

gG

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: May 22, 2005 )

My Love
Chriss;

I liked what you had to say, but I had a time reading in between lines...nice poem



Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: May 23, 2005 )





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