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Her tears start to fall
Under the moon as life ends
While mother holds her


by Surachet Suvilaisunthorn


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The following comments are for "A Journey"
by pengster13


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Great
One of the best Haiku I've read on the site. A lot of emotion packed into this one. Excellent work!

( Posted by: Apathy's tears [Member] On: July 5, 2002 )

Wow
So much emotion. So much power.

Write on!

-Jasmine (who needs caffiene!)

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: July 5, 2002 )

Fantastic
It's amazing. No matter how many haikus I write or read, it never ceases to amaze me that so much emotion can be shown in only 17 syllables.

( Posted by: the Co.konspirator [Member] On: July 7, 2002 )





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