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I feel you, in the shadows of my mind
Holding onto that little bit of me
The pieces I so desperately cling to
And yet I wish to lay forgotten

Kill me a thousand times over
Hell Iíll pull the trigger it suits me just as well
But I still linger here still hide in here
Empty shell of a girl longing to be lost

*the present is just a pleasant interruption of this past...*

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