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sharing true friendship
noisily expelling gas
no inhibitions


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The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
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The following comments are for "coming up trumps"
by ivordavies

Farting around
You know when you've found a true friend...If they can stand being in the same room with you while you're passing gas...I always like a good fart joke...or Haiku as the case may be..Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: May 22, 2005 )

Ran out of GAS?!?!
Ivor, what a hoot.....or make that a toot. What is better than an ol' fartin' Haiku or poem?

And if you ever run out of gas...I'm sure you got a good friend around who can share.

LAUGHING>>this is funny Ivor.

Dar:)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: May 23, 2005 )

Ivor's in the wind
Ivor: Thank you for the smile.

Ciao,
BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 23, 2005 )

Total acceptance
My musician boyfriend, who 'tolerates' my poetry would like poetry so much more if I showed him this. I won't though, don't need to give him any excuses! ;)

Nice to see your face and thanks for the wake thread. That was fun!

Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 25, 2005 )





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