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You left me standing, without speaking another word,
You watched me from above, not able to respond,
I call out your name into the night air, wishing for you to come back home.
You left me with her, the one with the wipe,
She cuts me up, and you don't stop her.
But how can you, your not here anymore,
I blame myself, because there's no one to tell me why I'm forgiven.
I stay up late at night standing there ready to here the words I ask, but I guess asking for them was to much.
Preying to see you was death, and wanting it now was an innocents childs wish.
So let me grow up and know that to see you again will never be,
I'll be lost for and eternity.

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The following comments are for "Standing"
by heartbreakersbeware

Cleaning
I can see the meaning in this, but I find myself paying too much attention to the errors in you writing. It's not bad, it just needs to be cleaned up.

( Posted by: kraziRenee [Member] On: May 28, 2005 )

Hey
Thanks for your comment!!! I know I really need to find and editor or learn how to spell!!! SOrry for the incovince!
Please keep reading!!

( Posted by: heartbreakersbeware [Member] On: November 21, 2005 )





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