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A race never ending
Competition for affect
Light drowning, smothering
Darkness

For a fleeting moment
Captured by her sovereignty
Silver light, reflective
Stolen

Fallen, now donning armor
For a battle seeming endless
Seeking redemption, justice
Revenge

So encompassing the battle
Wind exploding from it's fury
Raging power, tides turning
Victory

Reigning over his kingdom
His glow so truley giving
Battle won, war not over
Beginning

Kinship long forgotten
Brash ego now compelling
Sun and Moon, clashing
Forever






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