The following comments are for "3, 5, 3 Experiment" by skulduggery
jorge: i know there are several views on this. it has been my research that has made me agree with you. i have it on good advise that your opinion is valid. i hesitated to call this haiku, however, to spare any potential argument. is see that it is a volatile situation here at lit.org.
this was inspired by another haiku i read about herons. i see these frequently on my commute. the male and female are crossing over the river in opposing directions, widely spaced. i believe they are flying together, but he always comes around to her in his slow, lumbering flight pattern. it's lovely, really.
bobby7l: i'm glad you read this. your trend for writing in this 3, 5, 3; along with others following suit, has led me to try my hand as well. i am gleaning a lot by influence here, and appreciate this site for what it has lent me.
dareva: thank you for the compliment. if i were convinced in the beginning that this was a true haiku, i would have titled it in order with my last. since i was uncertain, i meant only to inform the reader of my intention. i'm very glad you enjoyed it.