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Hope joy happiness fear
Love excitment anticipation cheer
Desire lust pain sadness
Despair obsession insaneness gladness
As a writer I would plant these
In you, the reader's head
But I find they are my feelings
Brought about by being read














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by fasthinker

being read
Yes, I know exactly what you mean fastthinker. The roller coaster ride of hope, fear and anticipation of being read! I enjoyed the rhyme and reason here. One extra comma (after reader's) but that didn't affect it too much. Good write.

cheers
smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 17, 2005 )





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