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Just in time for Wimbledon


The Game Of Love!

Love is fabulous,
When it's all love you,
But love can be horrible,
When it's game love to...
Whoever!
You cannot be serious!
Ain't love delirious ?



------
Damian Hutchinson


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The following comments are for "The Game of Love"
by Tarquers

Gamesome love...
Tarquers ,
It's short but smart, very steady indeed. Though the introductory remark of yours doesn't go with the entirety of this small but nice creation.
Here you have been very succsessful to bring forth your ideation.
One thing more, you please pay more attention to reprsent yourself with an atmosphere in writing that may help you to grow more attraction in the readers (most ordinary)like me.
Regards,
Myth.

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: May 31, 2005 )

Game of Love
Tarquers,

"you can NOT be serious!!" McEnroe!? lol!!!!!!!

So glad for the intro, or I would not have caught that. I think if you were to drop the intro you'd need more and heavier word play. But you could also change the title for clarity. I think it's the weakest 'point' in the poem.

Quite simply fancy.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 10, 2005 )





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