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Sleep still,
little
Starfaring sleeper;
Dream your fill,
my
Daylighted dreamer;
never to
awken never
to awaken now.
Spin your
starry-souled ;
sagas yet unsung
tales now untold,
watch your life
now fold
open before
you
must never
know or
be told
that as
the tapestries
around you
unfold,
Life flies by
as you


grow old.

------
"You have lied to me, my dear Morpheous, and I have ended our little game; I wonder if I fear the truth more than your lies?"
-TRA


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The following comments are for "Dreamer"
by The Recycled Avatar

..liked it.
i liked it. the poem idea was good, and the way it flowed was good also. as always, keep posting!

~k-t

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: July 5, 2002 )

to The Recycled Avatar
Great poem, love how you used the spacing of lines for effect. I really like the words, it swirls nicely in my head and makes perfect sense, slightly sad and yet hopeful.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: July 7, 2002 )





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