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Who am I?
But yet who cares?
Let me prettend that someone does,
Why should they care, the reasons are very few.
But I must find me a to truely be happy.

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by heartbreakersbeware

who cares

You could have not said it any better, and it is so painfully truthful, especially to those with inflated egos.

Great thought of the day,


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 15, 2005 )

Who Cares
In your earlier post, You asked for comment,(and I assume) critique. There are several people on this site who are far better than I who can help you. If you live near a big city, check out writer critique groups with your work in hand. You can usually get the level of help with your work that you want. There are a couple of things that you must straighten out before people will take you seriously though. You must correct your spelling mistakes yourself and you must correct your grammar yourself. To most experienced writers, it usually shows either a lack of skills or most often, it shows lazyness or a lack of caring about your work. I make a lot of mistakes too. I still miss stuff. There are kind people here who know me and point those things out. Sometimes they seem harsh, but they are right. If you want to go to "Vanity Sites" where everyone "Loves" your work, but no critique, you might be better served. If you hang around here long enough, people will help you. You'll figure out who they are. Only time and the improvement of your work will tell if you are serious. Do the little things first. Buy "Eats Shoots, and Leaves," study it and it will help with those little things. Nobody knows everything, and neither do I. Have fun.


( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: May 15, 2005 )

You Two
Thank you! That means a lot, becasue that was what i was going for!

That is what i wanted! I am glad you are correcting me! I need it! I just wasn't read for it! Thank you for critique! I didn't mean to let you think other wise!Sorry about that! I liked your comments! I'm just not used to the back talk and the more you talk to me the more willing I'll be to it! Please don't stop critiqueing my work! Please! I need the hepl, becasue I still am not that good, but i can't get a striat answer out of my teachers or friends!


( Posted by: heartbreakersbeware [Member] On: May 16, 2005 )

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