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Mending takes time so they sya,
Then why do I feel like I've been mending for and eternity,
Waiting fo the dreams to end,
Time to keep going again,
but mending takes time.
I try to be patient,
I want to move on,
but mending takes time,
Wanting to end every memory,
Making them go away slowly,
But mending takes tiem
time I wish I could give it.

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by heartbreakersbeware

PLEASE
Please write and rate for me please!

( Posted by: heartbreakersbeware [Member] On: May 13, 2005 )

Mending
I liked the piece. One thing you can do to more comments is to go to other peoples work and when it comes to rating people havenít really done much that for me. Keep up the good work.

PoetFreak

( Posted by: poetfreak [Member] On: May 16, 2005 )





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