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I often wonder when it rains
Are these tears of joy or tears of pain
From eyes of sky blue the tear drops fall
Does she cry for one or are the tears for all
Her eyes see such suffering and so much sorrow
Should she just shut her eyes and not open them tomorrow
But her eyes also see a better thing
The smiles on her face that hope and love bring
Because for all the suffering and sorrow she must face
There's twice as much love in this wonderful place
So in answer to the question of joy or of pain
There's only one answer
Its really just rain




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The following comments are for "RAIN"
by fasthinker

rain and tears
i like rain. i like tears. i like the sentiment. i like the poem.

( Posted by: maimai [Member] On: May 13, 2005 )





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