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Cold chills passing by
Nothing left now but regret
As the winds mock me

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The following comments are for "A Breeze"
by pengster13

voices of air
I really liked this one, from the misdirection of the title to the final image of laughter in the air, ridiculing me as I trudge forward into a cold night that this piece brought out of me. Keep them coming, I'll be anxiouslly awaiting more.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: July 3, 2002 )

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Very nice. This is good haiku. I've been there before walking against the wind, feeling my regrets. Keep up the good work.

( Posted by: Apathy's tears [Member] On: July 4, 2002 )

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