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i would like to take a pill
that makes you want to feel
like riding a two seat bicycle
like in the commercial
through a medow filled with flowers
both of you smiling from ear to ear
and the weird thing is
the commercial dosen't tell you
what the pill is really for

there's a lot of commercials like this
do we really need all these pills
i mean most of them
cause more side affects than it actually cures
do we really want 6 different symtoms just to cure 1

i'm not talking about the pills that are necessary
but i do not believe that most of them are
i mean one of the most common side effects is diareahia.if that pill aint curing cancer,i aint taking it.
another side effect is sexual.and i dont even have to tell ya if something is going to hinder me in that department well......

we have pills for chemical imbalance,add,adult add,a pill for being better in bed,a pill to slow down,a pill to speed up.i say to all that;just give em a kick in the ass

i am for modern medicine,i just hope that 20 years from now,we dont end up with more important side effects than the short term usage
is suggesting.only time can reveal the long term
and i wish them dang commercials would tell us what they really do
give me a pill to ride that two seater


wes all toyysruss


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