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Becky
you're so fine
Becky
I want to make you mine
Becky
you want to be my girl
Becky
let me into your world
Becky
you see me looking at you
Becky
I like your hair so blue
Becky
you got it going on
Becky
you give me a big heart on
Becky
I got something here for you
Becky
I think you love me too


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by ZonerZone

Becky blue

Up front love/lust. I couldn't help putting a tune to this as I read it- I think it wants to be lyrics.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: May 10, 2005 )

drsoos/demeter
hey thanks! I'll take your suggestions to make it a song. I play the guitar and when I wrote it I was thinking it like a song. I play the drums too.

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

becky blues
Enjoyed the poem, ZonerZ. With hair so blue and a big heart on, I couldn't help but laugh.
cheers
smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

hey thanks smithy
Thanks dude! Glad I made you laught.I'll check out your writing too. You are a dude right? Last time I was thinking this writer on here was a chick and then it turns out its a dude. Then his friends g0t all weird about it, but it could of been my sister playing around. I don't know but, I'm not going to assume nothing no more.

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

it happens
Yes. Zoner. A dude. I can understand how you made the mistake. Sometimes it's easy to tell what the writer is like, other times not. They'll get over it. Reminds me though I should put my gender in my profile. Read you later.
cheers
mick

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

reademup
"you give me a heart on"? DUED! i know you wanted to put hard instead of heart lol just playen man.
keep it real mate ;)
ftmthasme

( Posted by: ftmthasme [Member] On: May 24, 2005 )

Thanks.
Smithy and ftmthasme thanks. I meant to say "heart on" not "hard on". I was playing with the idea of making the sex part of it be love.

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 30, 2005 )

becky
well if childish was what you were going for ya nailed it. The hard on thing was a good chuckle though. Maybe this was intended to read as immature cause tahat would make sense.
lamemansterms

( Posted by: lamemansterms [Member] On: June 7, 2005 )





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