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(For more fiction by drsoos see "EPISODIC" and "SPECULATIVE FICTION" or "drsoos")







They call them the dog days of August. Chestnut, my golden retriever, would have no more dog days. He had died in his sleep the night before, with his toy apple in his mouth. He was quite stiff when I found him. I was drenched in sweat as I tried to dig a hole for his grave.



His name did not match his color. Since puppyhood he would bury his nose in any exposed cleavage, given the opportunity- hence the name Chestnut- a dog after my own heart.



I hadn’t managed to dig even a foot deep yet and I was about to drop. The temperature and humidity were both in the 90’s. I briefly considered bagging him up for trash pickup, but I couldn’t do that- Chestnut deserved better. Unable to complete his burial without killing myself in the process, I decided upon cremation.



I built a pyre in his unfinished grave with dead branches and small logs and odd bits of wood. At least I would accomplish some yard clean-up while cremating him. I wrapped his body in an old sheet and placed him gently atop the pile. I lit the kindling, then covered him (more or less) with a lid from a large charcoal grill. I then went inside to have a sandwich and a few beers to drown my grief.



Several beers and an unplanned nap later, I returned to check on the cremation progress. Poor Chestnut’s legs had been reduced to stumps. His snout had shriveled and retracted, exposing more teeth gripping his apparently fireproof apple toy. Cremation had failed. I had merely roasted Chestnut. I removed his charred body from the embers and placed it upon the picnic table. His aroma was unexpectedly appetizing. This situation demanded more beer. I headed for the house to fetch a six-pack and decided to have another sandwich.



Returning to the scene, I saw my nosy neighbor Bob standing by the picnic table.



“Wow, a pig roast. It smells delicious. Could I have a taste?”



How could I refuse?

Bob enjoyed roasted Chestnut.



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"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson




"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins













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The following comments are for "Chestnut"
by drsoos

roasted chestnut
YUM! ;-D

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 10, 2005 )

Feastnuts
Ha ha, I knew this wasn't as it seemed when entertained bagging him up for the 'garbage disposal. Love your work.

Emlyn

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: May 11, 2005 )

roasted nuts
This was entertaining and funny well before the punchline, Doc. Great write.
cheers
smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

"chestnut's roasting on an...
soos: Thanks for smile. I needed this.


Reporting in, from far away field...
Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

Bad Soos...
You are so terribly bad it makes you deliciously good. I cracked up reading this. It is always a little unnerving clicking on your name, who knows what to expect. Loved it!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

One hotdog with everything, please
This really cracked me up. Really well-written - perfectly paced. Wouldn't the perfect end-line be, "Bob enjoyed Chestnut roasted on an open fire?" Maybe too obvious, eh, since it's already implied in the readers mind?

This ranks right up there in black humor and hilarity with a story by Elphaba called "Picker." If you've never read it, it's still in the archives. It's a real hoot like your piece here. Excellent work. It almost brought boogers out of my nose.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )

this is so good.
i really enjoyed it...i really, really did.

yours turly,

john. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: May 12, 2005 )





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