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taking off without his rider
still clutching a cup of warm apple cider
creating a path to trap the stray
hatching a plan so the dragon won't fray

healing the wounds embedded like rubies
not a care in the world as one of the newbies
stressing the point, your voice like a lark
write down your songs, but please not on bark

your songs of despair
renowned in the weyrs
surfacing talents, we found you there
cleansing the wounds for those whom you care

hiding your feeling form those that you love
hearing the creelings of those from above
hunger pained lizards searching stalking chasing
looking for something, or is it for someone?
then we all heard Menolly come on!

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