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shooting star, shining star
above all expectations
glowing star, planning far
depicting all dictations

getting a's or getting b's
entering all spelling bees
just writing poems or writing essays
P.E., science, even geometry

writing critics writing critiques
antiquing antiquers antiquing antiques
creation, imitation, or derivation
about limitations
all coming down
to what i want to be

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The following comments are for "futuristic dreams"
by MortalAngel

dreams
reallycool poem. you still in school too?

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

re
yeha im in high scholl right now im only a junior but my interests lie elsewhere

( Posted by: MortalAngel [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

dream future
Snappy. I liked the line about "antiquing antiquers antiquing antiques". Got a laugh from that one. Otherwise you give a good rendition of the chore of schoolwork and pressure of results.
cheers
smithy

( Posted by: Smithy [Member] On: May 11, 2005 )





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