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A soul in which i yearn for
a soul for which i cry
a soul in which i desire
but
the soul for which i'd die

a way with words that soothes
a heart for which i melt
a way with words that glues
my broken heart that felt

a soul that engulfs me
with emotions i've never felt
for i'd search the seven seas
but i just want to melt

a soul so angelic
that you think you're blind
but for all your life
you know they're just mine

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The following comments are for "Desire sequel"
by MortalAngel

desire
beautiful poem. Is it about your old boyfriend?

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

....
yeah

( Posted by: MortalAngel [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

to my friends
jamie hates to say that he like boys and that he is a homosexual. he has only had one girlfriend and decided to love boys more than girls. tho he doesn't want no one to know......j/k j/k. he loves girls 100%

( Posted by: mandilynn89 [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

hey!
I thought you were girl. sorry dude. I'm not gay.

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

in search for a soul
i don't care where your discussion is going... i find the poem touching.

( Posted by: maimai [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

re
i am not absolutley not never will be not a chance in the world gay

( Posted by: MortalAngel [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

i...
was only kidding, that is what j/k means. and do you have a problem w/homosexuality??????

( Posted by: mandilynn89 [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

whatever
Mortalangel; no problem dude. you can be whatever. just letting you know that I'm not gay. does your friend mandilyn have a problem with me not being gay?

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

re
why would you even think i am a girl i would write certain things back that contradict things i have written but people are watching me type

( Posted by: MortalAngel [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

no
no i don't, i was just wondering becuz i hate when ppl have a prob w/gays because 3 yrs ago my uncle died, and he was gay!!!!!!!!

( Posted by: mandilynn89 [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

re
would you knidly comment on my other poems please zoner mandi etc

( Posted by: MortalAngel [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

you
just can't ask people to comment. let them do it on there own. for all i know is your a person that is trying to be liked so much.

( Posted by: mandilynn89 [Member] On: May 10, 2005 )





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