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Everyone is entitled to not be sure
Can’t figure out if your thoughts are tainted or pure
Spinning in circles your head filled with doubt
Or could your heart know the truth and wants your head to stay out

You deserve to be with someone who will be able to share
Your innermost thoughts even when she’s not there

She should listen and learn when you need to vent
If your thoughts are unclear she will know what you meant

She should be by your side through the night and the day
And when you get lost she can help you find your way

If you need your space she will trust what you do
Because she understands these are things you go through

And if you lose sight of what is right and what is wrong
She won’t hesitate to tell you because she will be strong

And you know no one is perfect- not you and not me
So you accept the fact that you will argue and often disagree

But when you look in her eyes you will feel warm and feel safe
And when she holds you in her arms you will know you are in the right place

And when you are together you won’t need to speak
Because love is what you feel and yes you will feel weak

And of course you will be scared to let her in and let down your guard
But you will realize that she loves you and she knows love is hard

But she will also make you laugh because she won’t be serious all the time
And she may be the one if you can feel her while reading this rhyme

So let yourself go let your hearts become fused
And if these things are what you want then why are you confused?



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The following comments are for "CONFUSION"
by MeghanC

Sweet
That is a very lovely poem. I really enjoyed it, and it most definitely sums a lot of stuff up. Awesome job. :D

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: May 8, 2005 )

Cunfused ,but not...
by know means lost in your sweet love, that wonderful unconditional know and trust...very uplifting...enjoyed much

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )

MeganC, is anyone entitled to be angry?

Good read I like the way you wrote this, simple, clean and to the point...confusion is such a big part of life.


macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 10, 2005 )





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