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I should have known when the phone stopped ringing our time was over
Even if you cannot hear my voice you must still feel the words I want to say
I just wonít believe that all we conceived can so quickly be thrown away

Does the taste of my kiss ever find you
Does the scent of my skin ever remind you
Of a love that you know should have been

With so many people that cross my path why spend my mind on one
Time is a sucker because itís been long enough, why canít I let you go?
Could it be wrong, this lasting too long, holding on to someone that hurt me so?


Does the sound of my laugh ever soothe you
Does the image of me ever amuse you
Thatís a love that you know should have been

We walk in different worlds but you will feel the breeze of me on your face
And when youíre with her and you get that chill you will think of me
So strength I will have and the cold time will pass to see what our future will be

Weíre a love that you know should have been



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