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Today I am free
Today I am Free to be me

Today I am free to be the me that I say I will be
Today is just for me

Not what he says or she says
But what me says

I am a man and a boy
I am black and proud
I am a prince and a king
I now have found that
I am I, and nobody can take away
My will to be, free, and to be me





------
OgUnDe


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The following comments are for "FREEDOM"
by monkeychow

Go you!!
I really like this poem it really potrays the emotions related to freedom. It's full of such joy and excitment. I really love the beginnig. It has a unique and bouncy feel to it. However, I really don't care for the way the poem seems to lose that bouncy feel towards the middle. Overall, it's a good poem and it made my day a lil' brighter.

( Posted by: BelovedGreatWolf [Member] On: May 6, 2005 )

Freedom
be free to be and what you see is what you get and I love the pride...simple little write but, sometimes those are the best...

just Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )





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