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Perhaps you heard my voice but you were mindless to the clarity
Of the prelude to this reverie that plays to me like a symphony
And because of your love this theory became a reality

Perhaps you felt my rhythm but you were oblivious to my melody
If you just opened your mind the harmony would be more than a memory
and our future together would exist in high fidelity

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The following comments are for "High Fidelity"
by MeghanC

Hi MeghanC. I thought the internal rhyme in this piece was much better for the flow than the other poem I commented on. I enjoyed but it felt like it finished too soon.

( Posted by: Smithy [Member] On: May 8, 2005 )

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