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To walk away had to have been the hardest thing I ever had to choose
When the last thing I ever wanted to loose was you
Confused and removed from the tangibility of this reality
It was a technicality of what should be that got me through

I never asked to be put in this cold situation
But all I could feel was hurt and contemplation
Justification was just a complication for you
And closure was never a consideration

To see that you’ve moved on is the hardest thing I ever had to believe
It happened so quickly as if you never really cared for me
And brilliantly you disguise the real reason why,
I guess insecurity never left you lonely



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The following comments are for "Decisions"
by MeghanC

decisions
I hear a rap beat in this. It sounds pretty good.
Correct spelling error.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: May 6, 2005 )





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