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Where you are seems to be a mystery in reality.
Close my eyes and dream of thee so you can come and rescue me.
Looking back itís clear to see all the hurt and misery,
I caused for you and I donít blame you for feeling angry.

What can I do to make it up to you?
I lost my way and I donít know what to do.
I canít explain what was in my brain,
I just know I miss you and Iím going insane.

Am I ever in your thoughts? I know some time has passed.
Please tell me your heart is not lost for me, I know this time it will last.

Can I see you? Itís weird I know, but you have to try.
How will you ever know if we could get by?
Just touch me and you will feel it I promise.
Just kiss me and youíll know we can get through this.

Please donít let me go alone. Itís with you my heart had a home and I know that I did you wrong, but I will make it up to you until my life is gone.

I just wontí believe you can forget me so quickly when we didnít even say good-bye.
And I cry for you, but it is all on the inside and if you gave me a chance you would see it in my eyes. I want you to see me for what I truly am and with out this childish disguise.

You have every right to let me go, but know
Our souls were meant for each other and thatís the one thing I do know.
If you say no Iíll walk this world alone.


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The following comments are for "Love Never Dies"
by MeghanC

* sniff *
Sigh... I'm a sucker for tragic love poems.

( Posted by: maimai [Member] On: May 9, 2005 )





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